- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Adversity
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Click hereI'll stay in this silence
And breathe the heavy words
That were thrown carelessly
From your insecurity
I'll drink them in, eagerly
These poisons that you spit
And use them
To grow stronger
- COMMENTS
duddle146over 17 years agoSticks and Stones may break my bones ~ but words can never harm me - they only make me stronger. succinct!
lil_elvisover 18 years agoStrong character, growing mightier, leaving torment behind, cleansing the spirit. Well captured.
Belegonover 18 years ago...with an equally admirable goal. Proof that short does not necessarily mean simple.
impressiveabout 19 years ago... I had the calm determination to change venom to tonic. Very nicely captured. ~Imp
rikaaimabout 19 years agoIn a very short framework you've said a years worth and more. Sewn in the few lines we see, an underlying tale of long term missery and apparent carelessness is visible. Very well done.
Bridget69about 19 years agoIt's always possible to take something negative and turn it into something positive.
My Erotic Taleabout 19 years agoquick wit <grinin'> use everything that is given to you in life or pass it to those who need it <big grin>
great poem~
LadyJeanneabout 19 years agoSo hard to take suck the poison out and use it for yourself. This is a powerful piece of work. Thank you. LJ
