Afterglow

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Blissfully dripping. Soaked and spent.
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Blissfully dripping
Soaked and spent
Whispering gazes
Serenely content
Featherlike fingertips
Trace curves and cheeks
Admiration and wonder
My eyes still speak
Fingers glide softly downward
Begin to caress
Bodies stiffen once more
Roll and compress
Tongues leap in passion
Hips rise and fall
Incandescent pleasure
Rapture overtakes all

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
I have to agree...

I love the first half of your poem.

The second half seems rushed or at least a bit less focused. If you'd read a few of Shakespeare's sonnets and came back to this I bet it would be better.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
starts nicely

but peters out to soon