- Illustrated Poetry
- Al·Gharb·4
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4.
The nights
they feed on the excessive light of day
As if a ray of sun had been
left forgotten
across the metallic plains
of the south
- COMMENTS
LeBrozover 17 years agoThis poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.
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LeBrozover 18 years agopleasantly surprised by your work here;
the juxtaposition of image and imagery
Anonymousover 18 years agoMy least favorite so far. Not as original nor as innovative as the previous ones.
Fly
Angelineabout 19 years agoare you writing a book of these or what? :D
It's wonderful. Wonderful photo and poem. The photo is, to me anyway, very sensual. Know what I mean, L? xo, A.
