- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Ambient Pentameter
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Click hereIn quiet reflection
stars fill my gaze
feeling small & insignificant
in their presence
diluting your phrases;
my mind tearing away
considered implications
leaving words
whispered in the dark
drawing intimacy
from the silence
of the night.
7-27-04
- COMMENTS
Amyfriendabout 17 years agoof how insignificant we are in the whole scope of things..
duddle146over 17 years agoA poem no doubt written with the poet in a state of gentle repose. Loved the gentleness of rendering.
LeBrozover 17 years agoNice little piece of whispered intimacy; close and all alone in your universe.
jd4georgealmost 20 years agoDon't know... don't know: are they needed? Still, I paused to comment/post!
(I think you should dump'em).
