An ode to the T R O double L

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You bomb me and flame me with dilligent precision,
yet often leave grammer and spelling with complete indicision.

I write and I pour my soul into these words.
You sit there jeaulous and utterly disturbed.

Anon is your name, your title, your shelter.
Here I am exposed to you, without want nor comfort.

I tell how I feel, show you what I mean.
Your response it unkind, usually obscene.

I sit here and laugh, thanking you inside.
For your annonymous comments, tell me I've arrived.

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AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
I don't think...

that you've arrived yet. The train has a few miles to go before it reaches a station, but don't get off.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
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Putting a positive spin on a less than pleasant experience.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
. . .

You misspelled grammar.

PAPATOADPAPATOADover 18 years ago
Go Get Em

Thanks for a fun read.

sophia janesophia janeover 18 years ago
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Nice little ode!. :) Prepare yourself for low votes from Anon! Great poem.

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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A jealous little troll is she,

hiding in the shadows;

throwing out her hate-filled bombs,

to poison all that matters.

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But perhaps it's not the typos, misspellings, lack of rhyme or meter that she laments - the clue's right there in your short verse - you pour out your soul for all to see - and she.....

she don't got any! <wink>

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