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raindrops tears
wax wane unfading
my inner landscape
merging cloudy two-seater miles
to a man in a hat and smiles
walking through aisles
automatic seatbelts click
encircled in goodbye snap
hello stairs Pad Thai
kisses
Now two regrets
rain small voices
wax wane unfading
the distant landscape
lifting clarity northeast
while my heart's two lobes
tangle in this dichotomy
of loss
of love
- COMMENTS
lorencinoover 16 years agoI had to come back to this /
for when I read it first /
uncomprehending of it's meaning /
though not of its beauty /
that propelled me to seek solace in Anew Too /
desperate as I was to understand /
what thrilled me in the frustrated /
misty confusion blinded by beauty / / /
[Continued in comments to Anew Too]
duddle146over 17 years agoFlying away from the object of her affection ~ taking flight filled with regret.
LeBrozover 17 years agoThis poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.
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LeBrozover 17 years agoSo austere
Tight economy;
Words that ring true
Bittersweet and poignant
Of something special ~gone.
Tathagataabout 20 years agoabout the heart.....
breathtaking.
Your pain so often becomes our enrichment.
I feel guilty for enjoying it so.
Thank you Ang
Be Well
Lauren Hyndeabout 20 years agoI'm too close to you to have any doubts about the theme and message, but I can still tell you it's a wonderfully crafted poem, measuring up to your finest.
Kisses,
Anonymousabout 20 years agoI love your words as always, and understand your theme, but the message of your missive misses me.
jthserraabout 20 years agothe rain of tears. I love the unstructured rhyme here, it rings so softly, a hint of something. A hint here, of a love, perhaps forbidden, but welcome, as is the sadness of loss. Well done, I have missed such poetry here...
jim : )
