Another Bukowski Night

You may be approaching the borders of WritersBlock Land.

A touch of the Bukowski sentiments.

of thoughts is ever unworthy or wasted, as long as they can still be shared and instill a strong impression on its readers, which is exactly what this piece accomplishes.

I enjoyed the whole poem, but this really hit home:

"smoke and whiskey tempered emotional emptiness"

You do a wonderful job of expressing that feeling.

Splendidly put.

Your poem was mentioned on the thread

"New Poems Reviews" for saturday

Thanks for the journey ...(~_~) Art~

Your poem was mentioned on the thread

"New Poems Reviews" for saturday

http://forum.literotica.com:81/showthread.php?p=12208059#post12208059

Thanks for the journey ...(~_~) Art~

strong words really hit home here too. thanks

alone with your feelings. I"m often tempted to toss out work that I've done, but then realize it would be My emotions being thrown away rather than expressed in poetry. It's a wonderful two sided therapy session, you know; each time you post one and then for those here that see your work.<smile> So, speaking from this side, thank you for sharing your feelings in this very productive "session" today.

Vixxx

You are gifted writer and it's always a pleasure to read you.

I enjoyed the center of this poem:

while I compose these

lines itching

even now to tear

out the page and throw

them away

I still feel

better for having

expressed even smoke and

whiskey tempered emotional

emptiness