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Bathtub Breakdown

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I ask the big questions jilling in the tub.
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6 Comments
OldnotDead71OldnotDead71almost 3 years ago
Oh, this one I like!

The hair is excellent, the hand is drawn as poetically as the mermaid-like verse is written. Nice job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Wow

Damn sooooo Hott Alicemoon !!!!!!!

jthserrajthserraover 3 years ago
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Interesting imagery in those words. A painful desperation intensifying pleasure or diminishing it? Nicely done

RichardWWRichardWWover 3 years ago

Says so much in so few words...powerful words Alice! Spoke to me.

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