- Erotic Poetry
- BDSM Love Song
Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.
You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.
Click here
All of this pain and lust my dear
Is just so I can hold you near.
You look to me, one single cry
Escapes your lips, and I know I
Must press until you show no fear.
- COMMENTS
Peter_Cleveland3 months agoThe poem is quite accomplished in technique. Here is a challenge that few Literotica poets master: composing language that sounds natural and unforced within the constraints of a regular meter and regular rhyme scheme. It's very nicely done here.
.
But the poem's virtues go beyond technique. The situation it describes is interesting and somewhat disturbing--and also a bit of a mystery. I can't help wondering how consensual this BDSM encounter is. The poem's words could be spoken by a decent and responsible guy who's into bondage & domination. Or, conceivably, by some psycho killer. The girl's attitude towards this sexual encounter is not entirely clear.
.
If you like poems whose meaning is not simple and completely obvious--poems that require and repay a little pondering and savoring--here's a good one. 5*
