Bewildered

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Time turns my eyes
back 'round front
slipping down,
down,
before lifting me up again.
How many days must pass
before I remember
to begin at home?
Broken thoughts clash
filling up a place
where there is no room.
Once again,
what was I saying?

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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
REMEMBER YOUR VOWS

without a road map to guide. TK U MLJ LV NV

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Exquisite

A poet with an original voice ~ a special rendering.

duckiesmutduckiesmutover 18 years ago
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"How many days must pass

before I remember

to begin at home?"

Excellent, both in and out of context.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I love the tone of your work,

its interesting and thoughtful.

sacksackover 18 years ago
very interesting...

You are never less than intriguing in your poems!

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Once again, well done.

Not everything you do

is cookie-cutter same;

more like prismatic sparkle...

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
From the Author

I must give credit where it is due. Flyguy69 helped in the editing of this poem. Should have mentioned that in the posting, but will do so here since I failed to before. Thank you Flyguy69.

cymry

4degrees4degreesover 18 years ago
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i like your style here

good lil write.

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