Bitter Fears

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Rain softly falling
A warm cascade of tears
Drenching my soul
With bitter fears.

Time ticks on
I wait for you
The dark wind whispering
What my heart knew was true.

You were never going to come
All your promises were lies
My fragile world fractures
My love slowly dies.

I crawl to the edge
Stare into the abyss
The memory of your touch
The taste of your kiss.

None of it matters
Our love is dead
It was never real
Only in my head.

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10 Comments
tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
AFTER THE BREAK-UP

comes the blue period of mistrust. TK U MLJ LV NV

KOTKKOTKover 15 years ago
Beautiful

As i told you before only a person with beautiful heart & mind can write such beautiful things.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Your Heart

You have opened your heart so much that all I can do is hold you to me.

Roger

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Underestimation.

When affections become cloudy ~ sometimes love never has a chance to bloom.

Pegasus_FlyingPegasus_Flyingover 17 years ago
Haven't we all been there?

I could feel your heart thru your words...Thank you...Phil

AmyfriendAmyfriendover 17 years ago
"My fragile world fractures"..

painful realization.. of love lost

drksideofthemoondrksideofthemoonover 17 years ago
Moving

I like poetry, I wish I could write it. I found this poem very moving.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Imaginary Lover!

Love found ~ Love Lost only memories remain...

NirvanadragonesNirvanadragonesover 17 years ago
Simplistic

and very moving.

Thank you for sharing beauty.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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The pain's so real

For love {real or imagined} that ends;

However can the world go on?