- Erotic Poetry
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Click hereBeneath lowered brow I see your eyes
their unblinking wish to hypnotize
Between lips apart in shadowed grin
pass creature sounds from deep within
The face, a mirror of my own
expressed, the thoughts, to each are known
Circles stepped in measured death
the radius of heavy breath
Roaming moisture does collect
and on the softness does connect
Beginning darker color mesh
where the fist does kiss the flesh
Force the sense's journey on
a path to shining, lightning dawn
Every strike to make a mark
a place to recall the spark
When the eyes do later close
over form in supine pose
A journey then recalled in sips
when flesh is kissed by gentle lips
- COMMENTS
5thRingalmost 7 years agoAuthorThank you. One of the objectives of the poem is to be indirect about what is happening.
Even though I may never actually get the opportunity to find out, when I do write such a poem, there is always a desire to ask the hypothetical reader what they think is happening. Perhaps it is a search for a like mind.
I'm afraid all of the poems that I submitted are relatively old, and I don't really see myself writing any new ones, perhaps to both of our disappointment, but my story, "Anticipation", is my newest written work, and I am not yet finished with it.
I invite you to read it, and welcome any and all thoughts you may have, critical or otherwise.
Marie20791almost 7 years agoFirst erotic poem I've read that wasn't really hardcore and insensitive. Choice of wording is great. I'd love hearing more from you!
