Bottoms Up!

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tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
LAST CALL IS HEARD

in bars around the globe. TK U MLJ LV NV

AmyfriendAmyfriendover 17 years ago
Hilarious...

in the beginning and then I realized he was from Kampala. (Uganda) The land of Idi Amin Dada,, King of Scotland etc etc. and it all became clear. I mean where else would you find such fine delicacies as Potted Koala.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Hilarious.

Potted Koala - inebriated - plain drunk. If you expect to keep from laughing when you read this ~ You're Sunk!

Man RayMan Rayover 17 years agoAuthor
MyNecroticSnail…

...thank you. It was a giggle to write!

MyNecroticSnailMyNecroticSnailover 17 years ago
Just loved it

what a sense of fun

Man RayMan Rayover 17 years agoAuthor
KOLKORE...

there you go again, making me dig in deeper than deep to make you smile. Your comments are unique in that they speak straight to the heart of the poem. Thank you!

KOLKOREKOLKOREover 17 years ago
It made me laugh quite hard!

Bottoms up acquired more than one meaning with the smashing first line: “Are you Hezbollah or Kabbalah” Let’s put it this way: You’d have to know exactly who you are talking to (preferably none of those two groups) before asking OR, deep in the process of what the our poet seems to doing…The rest was just as good! Salute!

Man RayMan Rayover 17 years agoAuthor
Thank yous to…

LeBroz, Eve and Tess. I had serious fun with this one so making you smile feels good! You’re so right Eve about that dreaded shrinking factor; I too have to wait see if even I can read it! About the rhyming Tess, had to pull out a few rabbits!

Man Ray

GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureover 17 years ago
Made me smile.

I never knew that many words rhyme with koala! Well done.

Tess

WickedEveWickedEveover 17 years ago
cool looking illustration

Very cute poem. A little hard to read because of the quality, though I know it has to be sized down. I'd like to see the original. Or maybe I could just put my glasses on...

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