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He repeats his request through
triangular holes cut through breath-stained wood
tell me how you have sinned
show me how you have sinned
You move your head
from between oiled thighs
to glimpse of confession and tease.
Who is the better man,
the fortunate one who feasts on god's miracles?
this is how you want me
wrapped in latin and velvet
with prayers crying to Jesus,
please lead me to the fiery passion
only your father could have created
You press in further
reminding me whose face holds my fate
and I cry the names of the father
his son and this holy man who holds me hard in his grip,
sucking down my deliverance.
God and man pull for ownership of my prayers
until the only name I can speak
is yours
You want to be my god
and I kneel before you
knowing the moment I kiss your feet,
they will walk away
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here to see and ponder.
I like oiled thighs because it ties in nicely with the polished wood you find in a church.
I remember the confessional and how many times it would spark the most cruel and sinful thoughts once locked inside it.
And I like the end where it's the struggle between earthly and spiritual things.
One god who will be there always and yet, one who offers fulfillment of what you need now, but once you ask, he in essence leaves.
Great work
and good to see you back
And you brought out all the decadent debaucherous best of it, Rain! Might as well pull out all the stops, woman - we'll be talking about this one all together in the same place anyway! lol Kidding aside, this was a very different SeattleRain goes thunder and lightning and brimstone kind of piece - and Wanton Vixxxen goes WOW!!! over it. <wicked grin>
of this piece. sin is nice.........*LOL*.....nice work too.........don
OMG
"oiled thighs"
I don't like this, seems a little too much thigh oilin' goin on, consider "anointed"
"You want to be my god
and I kneel before you
knowing the moment I kiss your feet,
they will walk away"
this is good, again feel it could be a little better - Repent Woman
Other than that, wow, maybe a little too strong for my tastes, (but then everyone knows how refined I am)
Better than 100, not quite the killer it could be.
....blended seamlessly as only SR could do and that's no sin.
Tess