- Erotic Poetry
- Caramel Suite
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Click hereSun up down. Oh. You
know you can melt me
in day turns of twilit pouts,
lily soft I churn under
that flame, buttery sizzled
across your moveable feast.
I glaze smoky brushed, shining
the first notes of desire slide
to tingle open-mouthed.
Breathless. Yes. Lips ply
succulent promises. Heated
silken limbs twitch and ride
the simmer, the breaking sea
chorus moans, bubble bubble
caramel consumed. Sweet skin
burns cool waves fading timbre.
- COMMENTS
Sappholoversalmost 20 years agoIntriguing poem. The opening lines had allure but confused me some....made me hesitate as I read. But I loved the way the poem ended. It had me remembering summer vacation time at the NJ shore when, in my mid-adolescence, I was so often swelling and cresting with desire. Favorite line: "Heated silken limbs twitch and ride."
YDDabout 20 years agoOnce more with wonderment.
Excellent on several metaphoric levels.
I like the way you initially tie your music predilection into this one with the title's play on words.
Anonymousabout 20 years agois hot Ange. Very sophisticated erotic work--humbles my own immature offerings. Love the metaphor... much delish!
jthserraabout 20 years agoin that timbre... that sizziling butter in a moveable feast. Wonderful phrasing...
jim : )
steve porterabout 20 years agothis one made me sweat...anyone got a handkerchief...or maybe a kleenex ;) thanks angeline, for the beautiful poem.
Anonymousabout 20 years agothis one made me sweat...anyone got a handkerchief...or maybe a kleenex ;) thanks angeline, for the beautiful poem.
SeattleRainabout 20 years agoAngeline! pass the granny smith apple slices and move out of the way...
and on a more poetic note:
I love your line breaks, the way one verse/strophe runs into the other. I have never tried that, must do so. Very nice.
the word smoky was distracting, I began to think of mesquite barbque chips. Which are not good dipped in caramel.
WickedEveabout 20 years agoThis seems a little different for you. It's freakin' fantastic, but just a tad different, in my opinion.
I must now go write good poetry after reading this. :)
Maria2394about 20 years agocaramel being
my one safe addiction
I shall print and reread
until my heart is sated
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love it ange :)
