Changling

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deep-rooted trees are limned by the moon
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The sun's last rays spear the prevailing night
and a cool breeze chases the fleeting light.
Yellow, orange and red clouds
fluidly morph into purple and blue.
Then, when a starry dome blankets the forest
and deep-rooted trees are limned by the moon,
I glide silently upwards;
passing through leaves and branches
which close silently behind my passing.
From above the canopy, I see can insects
encircling whispering streetlights,
and the bats who eagerly purse them.
I coast, pushed by the night breeze,
and gaze at the cold, remote stars.
Wanting nothing more than to meet
another like myself.

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DFR1122DFR1122almost 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you.

Too many people spend their time looking at things, but not really seeing much.

29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowalmost 2 years ago

Wonderfully said, how all the beauty around us can still feel like an empty place.

DFR1122DFR1122almost 2 years agoAuthor

Hi Elorra, Thank you.

I vacillate between an INTJ and an INTP depending on mood and what's happened recently... I guess we'll never be considered the "life of the party" :)

ElorraButlerElorraButleralmost 2 years ago

I absolutely adore the artistry in your words. Such longing, so beautifully written. I laughed to myself when I saw your update I am a INFJ-an advocate. Practically neighbors, no wonder your work resonates so well with me.

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