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Click herea flower grows in the north
but her roots are in
aksum
blooms a new kind of beauty
in the land of
linnaeus
in the same soil or time zones, hence transplants, TK U MLJ LV NV
impressed
was worried for a minute by the title, in this place chocolate and petals can both be abused, this was on
Thanks to Esperanza, raconteuse, tigerjen, Angeline, Tristesse, 1201, and Pep. All much appreciated.
I understand your intention after reading all the comments. If it is how I interpret, it is nice, but if isn't, it made me make my own interpretation, which is also nice.
Ohhhh so spare, delicious, delicately lovely. So fresh...to be absorbed in its budding beauty; not dissected. Thank you.
Flower wasn't meant literally, and Linnaeus wasn't only the father of botanical classification; he was also the father of human classification.
Ok so I looked up Askum and Linnaeus and then understood the references in the two strophes and how the title fits the poem. I can interpret it a few different ways, which is good, but my main problem with it (and the reason I gave it a 4 instead of a 5) is that I feel the two strophes need something more to connect them up better. Without that, you're asking a lot from a reader to make connections between a flower from Ethiopia and the father of botanical classification. I'm not sure what I am to make of the association between these two things other than that they are associated. I feel like there's a piece missing. Just my opinion of course but a reader usually doesn't bring such esoteric knowledge to the reading.
I hope this isn't taken wrong, but I decided not to capitalize because I didn't want the poem to be easily accessible. I wanted people to wonder what I meant, and to solve the puzzle on their own.