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Click hereso long ago when we first met
love was a doubleheader
obivious to time and place
each game going extra innings
throwing smoke and hitting homers
now I need a reliever
blue pill good for one at bat
mechanical sex out of habit
recreation in an hourglass
well the batter's up my dear
Cialis saids 'let's play three'
Saturday's doubleheader, Sunday's night cap
playground open all weekend long
I smile to myself I am 16 and you are here
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,500 poems.
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with wit and a splash of brilliance all combined to make a terrific poem...thanks.
Once again you captured the moment (moments) perfectly!
Wonderful!
jg
Okay - if popping the pill's the way for you,
what must be, must be;
I just find that the slower rise,
makes the crescendo all the more delicious
while we're finishing the symphony together
mechanical sex out of habit
recreation in an hourglass
You simply have to love those lines. :)
Wow.. What a game.. Loved your play..<grins>
Wonderfully playfull imagery.Cute an sssy.
Thank you for the fun with your word play.(laughs)
I really loved this one, it was funny an sweet.
Have to say, this is a poem ya have to read again its that cute and funny.
nice turn on pop culture and a pleasure for an old ballplayer to read...
excellent poem...
liked the base ball game play~ <smile>
excellent poem...
liked the base ball game play~ <smile>