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Why Be So Damned Critical
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I once wrote a story about a cuckold named Jake.
A reader got offended, had an interesting take.
Reader had a tissy 
Called Jake a sissy,
But he was a cuckold, for heaven’s sake.

Is that like criticizing a dog, because it is hairy,
Or objecting to a stooge, cause he’s called Larry.
Or having fits,
Cause ladies have tits,
Or getting after Tinker bell cause she’s a fairy.  

I’ll never understand, or see otherwise, 
Why some just feel they must criticize. 
Instead of not reading,
It is worth repeating,
You must feel inferior, I sincerely surmise.

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