Cumberland Mills Cockatoos

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                            Good fighter
                            Good fighter
                            Aren’t they pretty birds

Nesting mother crooks her head
ice white plumes
ablaze
as deep within the feathered down
soft peeping mimics
me

                            Good fighter
                            Good fighter
                            I’m a pretty bird

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LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 37,000 poems.

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LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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Wonderful imagery with an economy of words.

flyguy69flyguy69about 19 years ago
Great!

I love this one, JD4G! Such a simple poem that creates a myriad of images.

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
I love it

Yes, I was curious about what was going on, but I didn't need more to love what I read.

jd4georgejd4georgeover 19 years agoAuthor
In answer to anna's question...

...suffice it to say that this poem comes from watching my young neighbors, and thier newborn daughter.

twelveoonetwelveooneover 19 years ago
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aha,

This formatting, framing, makes it happen

annaswirlsannaswirlsover 19 years ago
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jd! This is disturbing. Do you have a story to go along with it? I'd be very interested in hearing it :)

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 19 years ago
mention

Your Poem was mentioned on the thread

'New Poems Reviews'

thanks for the journey~

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