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She was falling
Into the hole
Deep
Into the darkness
Had she slipped
Was she pushed
Or
Had she jumped
Willingly
She’d started so high
And fallen so far
Trusting someone
She loved
It wasn’t the journey
That scared her
It was what she
Would find
At the bottom
Would he be there
Ready to catch her
Could she climb back
Out of the darkness
If he wasn’t
Or
Would she
Even want to
After falling so
Deep
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 3 years agoAbsolutely Beautiful!
Hallo Bree!
This is absolutely beautiful... very thought provoking,,, yes!!!
Thank-you... 5-Stars!
Your friend Gay Kat..
Pixiehoffabout 3 years agoThat descent matches the one we take into subspace, and is beautifully expressed x
