- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Definition: Daniel
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Click hereAll right,
how do I begin
penning a revolution,
that paradigm shift
world spun backwards,
black and white truths
inverted,
dogmas interplurally
connected for a while?
How do I capitulate
in words on paper,
like I did
I did I did
back then,
in fingers trailing
down an arm
to rest on whitened fist
and reassure
a dead end
cornered soul...
It's all right
all right all right...
It always was,
and will be
forever...
How do I ever
ever ever script
that kiss, that kiss,
that god damn
tender tendril
golden probes
that unfroze my numb
and never again
frightened heart?
How do I write
Daniel
into eternity?
- COMMENTS
LeBrozover 16 years agoThis poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 37,000 poems.
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LeBrozover 16 years agoWell written interogatives really draw the reader in, looking to offer his own answers.
Honey123almost 20 years agoYour way with words is breathtaking. I read your words and immediately want them to be whispered into my ear.
fawniealmost 20 years agobreathtaking! with every word you pulled me further into the emotion behind the words. i really loved this one.
lucky-E-levenalmost 20 years agoHow do you write Daniel into eternity? I think you just did, sweetie. It was so telling, I almost felt in the room when it was happening. Beautiful, Liar, as always.
~lucky
perksalmost 20 years agocould a poem rock my world more? No. The intensity that resonates from this poem, ,just kicked me in the gut, and I felt your melting your need, your craving. Wasn't hard on my eyes, my ears or my need for great poetry. Good job. I absolutely LOVE reading this one out loud. I rock reading this poem. :D *laughing*
Eumenidesalmost 20 years agoLoved it. Didn't think I was going to after the first few lines, but it molded into a fabulous sentiment that I loved. I love your use of repetition. You do it so deftly. Nice.
