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tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
CHANGE FROM ENNUI

into lifes swirlings. TK U MLJ LV NV

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Succinct vision tendered here; no verbal overkill.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Succinct vision tendered here; no verbal overkill.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
darkness.

Such a pleasing format white lettering on a dark almost black background showing the dark ocean at night. Something very mysterious about this fanciful rendering.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
upside down and backwords

I keep reading this in different orders-- and it always comes out wonderful-- amazing choice of words

AngelineAngelineabout 20 years ago
I agree with Neo

that you have a wonderful match of text and illustration here--that photo of an almost too-calm vast water is a perfect graphic expression of the sad langorous text. Beautifully done as always. :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
beautiful

lovely work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Words

with art?they match perfectly here. Nice work. I really enjoy short pieces like these as they always have much more to say than the words and art.