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Click hereIt could hit you in a garden
where your wife's cousin Barbara
bends over some chrysanthemums
and in the denim drawn tight
over her long, settled thighs
you see lizard-skin boots,
a little rat-tail switch
clutched in her fist like a rose,
and her tongue quick and raw
as a snake's slide through grass.
None of which ever shows—
has ever shown, ever shone
—in the sweet brown teacakes
of her cozening eyes.
Nice little number, let's hope your wife doesn't see it. ;-)
An enjoyable piece of erotica. I always feel I should make a critique when I comment but I've got nothing really to ssy except this rattles in ones head like marbles, which is good.
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Coming out of my self inforced silence to say that is just fantastic
If I could write Erotica like that then I'd have buckets full of poems. If all Erotica read like that, then thats all I would ever do. Read it and write it. Really nice, Tzara. Thanks
Come out of the threads (I know... they are fun), but aren't poems what we are here for? So, I can forgive sun struck people for not saying Mazel Tov for getting my citizenship (sorry Tzara, couldn't resist...), but this is a very good poem! Actually, it's both erotic AND very good!
So do something about it! Plus, I have not 'heard' Eve panting so hard on her review day(s) after admitting to reading a poem, since...ever!(check for yourselves).<P>
Capturing the moment when someone you thought you knew suddenly seems different as you see some features in a way that turns that person into a sudden object of strong desire (in other cases love), is truely wonderous. That person is presumably the same - bur she is not! I can imagine a Chemist on her way bringing the chemical formula for what happened in the brain, but fortunately we only need to contend oursrlves with the poetic chemistry of attraction and love, and the poetic author of this poem passes the subject with flying colours.