First Fuck

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Sweating bodies
on satin sheets
champagne on ice
red roses in vase,
legs entwined
long kises on lips
delicate touches
gentle thrusts,
breathless pants
electric pleasure
muffled screams
kneading flesh,
juices flowing
~ First fuck.

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LeBrozLeBrozalmost 19 years ago
Did It Where?

The first time's so special,

Tho ~hellbaby~'s thoughts are better

than the first thing I thought

of the back of the trusty old Chevy

ewopperewopperalmost 19 years ago
loved it

it was quick, to the point, descriptive, yet no overkill, excellent work

~hellbaby~~hellbaby~almost 19 years ago
When the waiting is over

You captured the moment so vividly. I'm thinking the first time with the one you've dreamed of for so long more than the 'first' time.Nice memories..Thanks!

Honey123Honey123almost 19 years ago
and hopefully not the last

nice erotic poem!

~Honey

skip.69skip.69almost 19 years ago
Been away

I've been away, and now I am back you were the first author I looked up to find what you have submitted wilst I have been away. Congrats! Terrific stuff. I'm hard as soon I start to read ANY of your works - this one especially!

rarebreed21rarebreed21almost 19 years ago
Pretty Intense

makes me wanna regain my virginity and do it all over again but like that this time.

Really nice.

***Keep Smiling***

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
my first fuck

roughhands pulling my legs apart.....arms lifting them over my head....legs stiff, unused to it....cold feeling of liquid on my man cunt....excruciating pain....huge cock thrsting...warmth in my loins....hot cum filling me....again...often...now...everyone, please.

techsantechsanalmost 19 years ago
Great writing

You paint a great picture with words. Good job!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
First?

I wish my first fumble was accompanied with champagne! LOL

Hot as always.

b'brig

dcpoet44dcpoet44almost 19 years ago
then....

does the second come next.......*LOL*. captured nicely......don

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