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Click hereFire water over feathered breasts.......higher
dancing to beating drums .............and
circling a blazing fire, rising higher
Chanting chorus .........................~rising~
ancient as the wind .............~ascends~
under the stars, the Fire's ~smoke~
The flames flickered ...................~flying~
then burst from the coals ......~a Phoenix~
flapping wings of fire, it ~arose~
loved it... not just the words and how they were laid out but the way you laid out the structure of the lines and stanza'a fit the beating of the tribal drum as well!
another great one Arty!
kisses,
T
One is a tribal dance around the fire and the other is the fire itself dancing. Great double meaning set to the music of poetry. It was both creative and clever, Art! <smile>
Vixxx
Vibrates with a kind of tribal energy that puts to great use nature's elements.
to steve nash of the suns basketball team in phoenix......*LOL*......being silly.....liked this......don
Flying fire?? I believe I am!! I enjoyed the build up. Very good poem!
I like the words and how you put them in places. But I dont know this poem. What has Arizona to do with the rest. Is it about indians dancing at a ceramony??? The words are nice but Im not smart enouf I guess. :(
you got me with this one Art... I enjoyed it and think I understood it .. lol.. you have been hanging out with me too much ....... good job I like the mystic qualities..
du~
An enchanting read Art,
Loved
Chanting chorus .........................~rising~
ancient as the wind .............~ascends~
under the stars, the Fire's ~smoke~
Fantastic!
~ J