- Erotic Poetry
- Heartless
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My passionate kisses are real,
So share them with me.
My warm embraces are real,
So hold me tenderly.
My erotic lovemaking is real,
So cum with me.
My carnal moans are real,
So know you're pleasing me.
My laughter is real,
So thank you for brightening my life.
Please don't push me away
With futile expectations,
I'm unable to fulfill.
I can love you in the moment
Give you passion like none before.
But if you ask too much of me,
I'll quickly close the door.
So if you'd like,
I'll...
Listen to you,
Care for you,
Laugh with you,
Passionately kiss you,
Hold you,
Make romantic love to you,
Erotically fuck you.
But please don't expect more,
Than I have to give.
I can love you in the moment
Give you passion like none before.
But if you ask too much of me,
I'll quickly close the door.
I'm heartless,
I gave it away long ago.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoI enjoyed reading it and I can relate. Lost love is difficult to replace.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoWow that was a powerful piece Robbin!! You have a gift and you should write more!!! Well done xx
Alan.
Robbin_Youngalmost 12 years agoAuthorThank you everyone for your kind comments and votes!
Since this is the first poem I've ever written, I'm amazed and honored at your incredible feedback and support. You've truly inspired me to follow my dream of becoming an author.
Robbin
xoxo
Snow Snakealmost 12 years agoHi Robbin!
I'm thrilled to see you in here. I loved this poem, and I hope you'll keep writing. You have such a beautiful heart, and your life experiences will provide you with all the poetry subject matter--emotion, pain, love, passion, life experience--that any writer could ever wish for.
You and I are personal friends (although you may not recognize my Lit. member name), and I would love to see you write up some of your life experiences for the site. Call them fiction; no one would ever believe that they are, in fact, true (but I know! ;-).
All the best, wonderful Robbin!
Snow Snake
James65about 12 years agoNice poem,wonderful resume,fair warning to your lover and I think you made my heart hurt a little,yet intrested me to want to see if I could be the one worthy of your attentions and man enough to care for your heart.
Anonymousabout 12 years agoSugar I don't know poetry but I like your style and effort!
Hope you expand your writing to story's and maybe even audios!
Your blog site videos are just wonderful and I am in deep lust for you!
Hope your Lit stay is very pleasurable for you!
Robbin_Youngabout 12 years agoAuthorI've ever written, and I'm sooo excited it was accepted on Literotica...Yayyy!!!
Please vote and/or comment, I'm curious as to what you think...thank you.
Robbin
xoxo
