- Erotic Poetry
- Heavenly Attribute
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Click hereUlterior motives in truth I have got ‘em,
And methods of tribute I have sought ‘em,
But I do realize,
Being kind to the eyes,
Is the reason I so admire her glorious bottom.
- COMMENTS
JakeRockwellover 1 year agoI love the idea and execution. However, I think it should be a 4 line piece. Lines 3 and 4 could be one line. I'd follow that by removing some of the verbosity in line 5 (which becomes line 4). For example, I'd try "Is why I admire her glorious bottom." Just some suggestions, so please don't be upset by my critique.
