Hedonia

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A writer has just made love to her lover
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Crackling leaves
Burning, smoking
Filling my room
With bluish haze
My fingers twirling
Through soft curls
You lying beside me
Asleep, and dreaming

I cup your breasts
Soft beneath my fingers
Creamy skin aglow
In the early light.
I snuff out my cigarette
And reach for my journal
To draw you with words
In the dim light

I reminisce the night before
When I drank from your cusp
The sweet nectar
Of your femininity
As you made Sapphic love to me
Skin to skin we writhed
In the agony of pleasure
Drinking from the chalice
Of euphoria and ecstasy.

Then a moan
Comes from your
Crimson lips
And you stretch
Languidly
A cat upon my lap
I brush your lips
With mine
My loins bursting
Forth a flood
That threatens
To drown

Once more we wrestle
Slow and smooth
Arms and legs
Entwined
The haze dissipates
Replaced by body heat
As my words
Fall to the floor

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PiscatorPiscatorover 4 years ago

Well said, my only comment is the line "In the dim light" in the 2nd stanza could be removed as the focus of a writer is words. It also eliminates repeating the same word in a stanza.

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