- Illustrated Poetry
- I Am the Poem
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- COMMENTS
LangstonLoverover 11 years agoWe are this love this sex this longing and this fulfillment
LeBrozalmost 17 years agoThis poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,500 poems.
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LeBrozover 17 years agoYour body is a poem? Far be it for me to argue such a point with any woman. Fiery illustration.
duddle146over 17 years agoWords embodied. This beautiful rendering is sheer poetic beauty. I loved the tasteful illustration which serves to accent the poem itself.
RisiaSkyeabout 19 years agoIt's tough to incorporate the visual with the metaphorical, but I think this one does it nicely. Lovely image, and it still manages to work as poetry, which all too often doesn't happen once a naked body appears on screen.
I love the placement of the words "solar plexus", btw.
enjoyed.
WickedEveabout 19 years agoI like solar plexus. The poem is good and so is the image. Together they're great. Separately, maybe not as strong.
sackabout 19 years agoThe whole effect is convincing, despite some trite phrases here and there. Definitely deserves an "A" for originality!
