- Non-Erotic Poetry
- I Want To Love You Again
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Click hereI use to think I couldn’t love you more
My favourite sound was your key in the door,
Seeing your face when you walked in
Holding you close as you gave me that grin.
You promised me we would never part
And that I would always hold your heart,
I never dreamt that I’d get burned
Love is sour truth I have learned.
I hoped and prayed for the day you’d come back
I cried in my sleep and mourned what I lacked,
I went over the whens, the ifs and the whys
Let the tears sting my face that wept from my eyes.
Now your sorry and want to come back
But I’m not sure I can handle that,
The pain you caused was to intense
To risk my heart would not make sense.
For the sake of our child I want to forgive
I want to forget and again start to live,
I wish I could trust you and get over the pain
But I just don’t think I could love you again.
- COMMENTS
omen7about 15 years agoThis is one of the finest poems I've ever read. I wasn't sure it was even possible to convey so many powerful emotions with so few words, yet you did just that.
wildtigeralmost 19 years agoI love your storys and poems.Also I want to say thank you for commenting on my poems.
candy
LeBrozalmost 19 years agoPowerful, soul-rending verse
Of pain that dies at the end of time
Making the reader want to reach out
To comfort, console, and end the pain
everrandyalmost 19 years agoGot to agree with skip. Your writing is superb, J. I love your work. (In my imagination I also love you!)
skip.69almost 19 years agowith Sexy Vixxxen below. She has hit the nail right on the head. You writing is superb, Jennifer. I always imagine myself as the recipient, though - am I egotistic? Or do I just admire your work?
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoheartfelt images to pull the threads of hearts abound...nicely penned...bluerains
Wanton Vixxxenalmost 19 years agoMy absolute favorite of your work, Jenn! Besides deeply and personally relating to the feelings you expressed here in your words, you pulled from your pen that sixth element of writer's success I believe in~ the sense of... linger. This piece has lingered with Me since I voted on it earlier today, and will probably dwell in My head for the rest of the night <smile> You hit the right emotional button with this one, woman!
Vixxx
dcpoet44almost 19 years agohas a way of changing perceptions in life. it certainly shows here......nicely done jennifer........don
RhymeFairyalmost 19 years agoI think we as women have so been there..
Err not to leave the men out.
Just I too understand and can feel your pain.
Wonderfully heartfelt sad poem..
Huggs to ya Hun*
