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Click hereWhen you said that I couldn't
You told me what to do
I knew there was a distance
Away from me and you
I will be far from you
I'll never hear you say it
Your anger holds you down
But you know you have wronged me
And I have the higher ground
I stand on higher ground
On your dark, long, lonely nights
When you nurse your cold heart
Remember that I left you
So I wouldn't be alone
I will not be alone
Been there... done that. It didn't seem poetic at the time. You captured it and you nailed it. 5*
I liked that a lot! 5*****! I'm trying to learn to write poetry, but I have not written anything this good.
Worth a 5 from me, especially as a first poem. The extra line, showing inner strength, was very impressive. Please write more.