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- Intelligent Design
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Click hereIntelligent Design
The evidence presented
for all to look and see
and looking at the ancient rock,
see many different things.
Science sees great pressures
of rock deformed and shaped;
Design sees rock unchanged
save by events of late.
The evidence presented
for all to look and see
and looking at the living earth,
see many different things.
Science sees such changes
of eons long slow pace;
Design sees life unchanging,
deposited in place.
Science and Design,
they stand so far apart;
and speak they do in fiery tones
wrapped up in different tongues.
© Leon Brozyna 2005
- COMMENTS
KOLKOREabout 17 years agoYep, I can see how right from the start it’s you – even when the subject echoes bitter feelings and hatred; in your poem there is a soft almost humorous tone. For me, the last stanza was the most significant. While most of the poem follows the common (but erroneous) perception that we have two competing “theories”, it’s in fact a Babylonian meeting of two languages – where two communities (one of the science and the other of the faith ) talk at each other with no real communication. The science community speaks of theories which must be shown to be “disprovable” to qualify as such; the faith community talks about its “theory”, which is a misnomer as it actually presents an article of faith, which could never be disproved. The model of two languages which you touch on, points to a different paradigm, not that of opposing or distant point of views but that of parallel or of different dimensions on the same world. ‘Just’ for rousing the minds you deserve all the credits.
CaPic267about 17 years agoLeon, You treat this touchy subject so lightly -- a bite of satire this morning. I got a howl at that ending -- speaking in tongues! CP
AnnaVenus69about 18 years agofairly new to Lit, fairly new to your work, I am reading, absorbing, digesting, learning, enjoying but mostly loving! Thank you, you feed my mind and my heart. Kiss, Anna
Bill Dadaover 18 years agoI am starting to hate how the religous facists are taking perfectly good words and making them ugly. In this case they take the words intelligent design and turn them into an oxymoron. Nice write.
ty,bd
Jennifer Cover 18 years agoLeon my apologies, I have only
just found this, you never told
me you had started submitting
your work, I'm gonna have to
punish you for that! <wink> lol.
I really enjoyed your poem hun
it's well written, I love the
flow but most of all I love how
it has got my brain ticking.
A great poem from a great thinker.
Well done babe.
~ Jenn x
LeBrozover 18 years agoAuthorThank you all
for words so kind
on this, my first submission.
What can I say ~ the muse inspired.
Wish she'd sit in my lap everyday ~
now there's a delicious thought...
sackover 18 years agoI can even handle all the "sees". they work perfectly within the overall structure of the poem.
RhymeFairyover 18 years agoI love thinking poems and this is it.
I can see it changing, transforming
... Just brilliant and classic ~
More Plez Leon
... Good to see you finally submitting !!!
sweet GA peachesover 18 years agoFor some reason it feels
like the earth has shaken
particles of knowledge
right out of the creases
formed from years of rock.
.. and to the intellect of the
mind that created such a brilliant
piece of work, I applaude.
*****let this not be the last,
of your muse, would like to see
more *****
-sGp-
