Kinesthesia Recall

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Blending morsels of words;
struggling with disseminated DOTS
layered within faulty afterthoughts.

Draining remnants of sensual bliss
between each linear line
bottled into our musing rhyme.

Why do we need such semblance of us
papered in patchworks of reproduction?

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7 Comments
duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Mysterious!

Morsels of words ~ food for the soul. So mysterious - yet enchanting. Lovely!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
write more of these

complex like a puzzle..keep it up Q

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Another fine piece of abstract imagery...

sacksackover 18 years ago
one of your best...

reads very well...bravo!

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
recall

nice write blue~ from mind to pen~ poetry in the end

lobomaolobomaoover 18 years ago
•) awesome!!!!

a patchwork

enjoyed in both directions

held up close for comfort

each part shines

their separate songs

from across the room

or over here

each skipstep lace loop

delights and lights our eyes

while the rest of us

try our senses

sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesover 18 years ago
(((((((( BLU ))))))))

You are simply beautiful..

The last lines were my

favorite, oh and the first..

through 8th.. *grins*..

I hope you saved

your patchworks,

to linger,

to when you have left

this world, so that

your soul will

continue to move ..

the earth,

and bleed the oceans ..

luv2theblu,

-sGp-

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