Lonely with You

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You can feel lonely in a crowded room
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You lie beside me but I feel no heat.
You kiss me but my heart is still.
You made a promise to love me 'til death.
For me that happened now.
It's impossible to love you if you don't love yourself.

One word says you Love me, the next feels like a slap.
With the armor I've been building it feels like a tap.
My heart has nothing for you. I can't wait to be free.
I've never felt more lonely than when you're here with me.

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Saif_and_SoundSaif_and_Sound3 months ago

Shouldn't have read this on Valentines. Beautiful if painful. 🌹

Should teach you Arabic for the poetic potential!

FamilyGuy66FamilyGuy66over 2 years ago

Exquisitely beautiful in its agonized longing. Thank you.

R. Jay MoranR. Jay Moranover 2 years ago

There's no loneliness quite like loneliness with another. Very well written.

Paul4playPaul4playover 2 years ago

This is painful to read: bound to another who is cold as death.

Well written and starkly portrayed.

My spine is chilled.

MaydaypilotMaydaypilotover 2 years ago

Loneliness with our other - captured in your poem perfectly.

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