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Winter_Fare
Winter_Fare
105 Followers

When hatred builds a home
It isn't thickened skin
It's little bricks
It's all the words
We choose to cling to

Lime mortar
Hardens year by year

The toxic atmosphere
Of disappointment
Fills the house
Sterilising open wounds
That bleed no more

There's no unsaying what's been said
But all you carry in your head
Can be laid down and put to bed

Outside under the willow tree
Older, softer, harder than me
I lock the door and 'lose' the key

Winter_Fare
Winter_Fare
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Paul4playPaul4playover 1 year ago

Stark reality, portrayed with beautiful poetry.

Excellent!

BlissMaraBlissMaraover 1 year ago

The subtlety, insidiousness, and toxicity of losing, of distancing, of the rending. Such a cogent, descriptive poem. You tell it so, so very well.

MigbirdMigbirdover 1 year ago

So very true; little bricks. Hard to lose the key, but … .

ElorraButlerElorraButlerover 1 year ago

Painfully beautiful. Xx

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