My Brain's Too Damned Loud

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What makes this writer's brain hurt
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Dedicated to my Muse, RiverMaya

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My brain’s too damned loud,
My ideas far too many!
Character creation is easy,
But not story incentive.

Do they strive for love?
Do they strive for redemption?
Do they strive for companionship?
What’s the story’s intention?

So many good beginnings in the stories I’ve planned,
But good endings, they task me, they drive me quite mad.
My styles can vary, from lighthearted to dark,
But satisfying conclusions remain an elusive mark.

I could try writing noir-style, stories that end in despair;
Emotional devastation, a living nightmare
I’m sure I’d enjoy it, but would readers be the same?
Do I even want this genre attached to my pen-name?

In the end, I want readers to feel good when a story is done;
But real life includes losing, races not always won.
Maybe that’s the point, though, people read to escape,
So I’ll keep my stories focused on positive fates.

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SomeOneTwoThreeSomeOneTwoThreeabout 1 month ago

That was one fine poem.

Thanks.

Top ratings from me.

CrazyDaveTrucker60CrazyDaveTrucker60almost 2 years ago

Read your poem, reminded me that I have about 25 orphan stories waiting for a decent ending. I abhor the Disney finish, but as my stuff is almost entirely tall tails just for fun... well Greek tragedy just won't do. Anyway, thanks for rationalizing my dumb ass feelings . Poem was great!

JuanaSalsaJuanaSalsaover 2 years ago

Nice poem. I empathize.

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