- Erotic Poetry
- Nice to Know
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It's nice to know that there's a place
Where I can be at home and feel
The hardness when I gently grace
Sir's lap and sense him slowly peel
My panties down, because he needs
To bare my bottom to his gaze
And to his hand, because it feeds
His aspirations - he displays
An eagerness as each spank lands
To make me squeal and yelp. Each blow
Keeps him erect as cock expands
Keen for a place that's nice to know...
- COMMENTS
Tail_Gunner4 months agoReally nice stuff! ... Poetry has to be subtle, gentle -- yet evocative to get my attention!
... I'm too damned old to appreciate just being hit over the head with mere words!
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now: fiction -- start with something short, a thousand words or less.
... there will be time later to do character development, twist in the plot.
and, LOTS of dialogue! ... DO the action, don't write a 'book report' ABOUT the action.
... You can do it! ... Good luck!
Tail_Gunner AKA Levi Coldwater
