No Turning Back

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Young man's first time with an older woman.
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Penisvixen
Penisvixen
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The first night
he came to me
he was nervous
as hell
I was confident
in my ability
to please him
but I didn't know
what to expect
from the young man
as I lay next to him
his breathing quickened
and I smiled
maybe stroking him
wasn't helping to relax him
we made our fantasies
become reality
as we rode the waves
and crested
falling back breathless
and fulfilled

Penisvixen
Penisvixen
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PenisvixenPenisvixenover 5 years agoAuthor
The change

was that we decided to hook up although we shouldn't have. Not knowing what to expect from each other puts a little anxiety into the mix. Nothing was wrong per se..there was nothing to fail at. An older woman and a younger man were the fantasies we each had. Totally fulfilled...by 2 consenting adults.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Dave, I'm sorry

I don't agree, this artist can do much better and has. There is an un-eveness here. Up to line 15 it looks like a failure on the bed sheets, then all of a sudden the sky opens up--

"we made our fantasies........falling back breathless and fulfilled. What wasn't working before? What made the change? Why no detail on the love making?

It sounds like the teacher who was arrested for fucking a 14 year old.

ROBERTODAVOROBERTODAVOover 5 years ago

Beautifully expressed. So well done!

Robertodavo aka Robert Davidson.

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