Peacetroopers

enter into the brink. TK U MLJ LV NV

and you don't want her catching a cold and getting a runny "you know what"...Well done, I thought it was a brilliant presentation.

Now that has got to be one strange relationship if it is viewed as nothing less than armed conflict until the joy of post-orgasmic bliss. If a serious relationship, they'd best try for counseling because all the sex they can handle won't fix their problems.

Now that has got to be one strange relationship if it is viewed as nothing less than armed conflict until the joy of post-orgasmic bliss. If a serious relationship, they'd best try for counseling because all the sex they can handle won't fix their problems.

A planned invasion of his favorite ladies' panties(knickers) whatever. Poem reads like a major assualt; but this one takes place in Lustland instead of a battlefield. Fun to read.

a delicate material!

1. I understand that one could find the ‘knickers’ ugly, especially if one could not do them justice. Surely justice is due to the knickers!

2. Images are subjective.

3. Anon comments are flimsy!

Pax!

Man Ray

All I can say is those are the ugliest knickers I ever seen.

however do I cover twenty-one comments? The number alone is a testament to what in the end proved a lively poem. Better titled it could be “Stormtroopers”. Lively I can work with; thank you.

To those of you who took the time to read and offer constructive substantive comments, thank you! To those of you who introduced yourselves and shared why the poem resonated within you be it memories/favoured songs/personal experience etc, thank you.

My Erotic Trail, thank you for the "New Poem Reviews" inclusion and your considerate comments therein.

Now over to you, KOLKORE! Without doubt, you are a dedicated unbiased humble New Poems reviewer. Literotica and those who post are blessed and I for one am most appreciative. What is most exceptional is that you organise your thoughts then give in a clean, fair and transparent approach. You do your homework and it shows. Your valuable reasoned observations act as a mentor. You extend remarks in a respectful and encouraging tone and I for one hear you. Finally, your two qualified critiques answered a good number of comments. Thank you for visiting “Peacetroopers”!

Man Ray

This poem isn't good, but the panty picture is sexy. If you still had voting as

an option, I'd given you a score of 3. Also, one other thing, with all the

anonymous commentary on your poem it makes you look a bit of fool.

I have one more external word for you, how about "jealous"?

Do you think you need a license to understand the meaning of that one?