Phantom Surrender

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“Phantom Surrender”


He is here to win.

Within the midst and mist
of seamless indigo;
uncontrolled hours of crave filled night
Within the decadent fog of moist dreams
and fantasy’s boiling sands
he seeps in sin soaked triumph
A Zorro masked seduction
of flesh tone shadow’s silhouette;
erotic and hypnotic to her
his passion’s prey
Beneath closed eyes of weakened will
and through opened soul that is weaker still
A taunting touch of ten fold lust is known.
Parting slumber’s wanton lips;
awakening the wantonness within such other lips
that tremble and quiver with fearless desire.
He strikes and moves; his weapon’s thrusts
precise and measured in tortured calibrations
only she survives.
She stirs and squirms in feigned helpless counter
and mews in betraying melting tones,
“Mmmmmmmmmmmmmore ...”
Raw animal instincts rising;
heating now, the vessels
from which intrusion and
champagne’s cream
froth and foam and spill over the
voracious victor’s cup;
leaving its sensual spoils to be drunk
in another climactic war.
She succumbs to a fierce grinding halt;
lying in writhing defeat
in a tangled white sheet
        alone.
The illusion night’s specter in fading beholds
a sweat streaked ruin and breathless rubble
His conquest tonight
of countless surrenders before.

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PatHous56PatHous56about 18 years ago
Hot Wake-up Call.

This promises to be a long day, so I read this to send me off. Now I'm tempted to call in sick! Patricia

LeBrozLeBrozalmost 19 years ago
Fiery

Of passion etched in black and white

Exploding in fiery cleansing color

I need a cigarette

and I don't smoke

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
I am in awe...

In awe of your prose, the fluidity of which you write. The images, and metaphors are so genuine, and alive. This work of art is a painting you drew with words. Thank you for sharing your intimate soul. ~ :) Rain

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Grinning mischeviously...

Well, if I didn't know better....*wink*

This was fabulous baby, and not too many would understand the "Zorro", so you...have touched on a multitude of inside thoughts that mean a lot to Your Man of Sand.

So beautiful, so expressive, so damn fucking erotic!

Your MOS aka SMF

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
steamy

wow, nice imagery...very hot.

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
Very hot...

and seductive.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Mmmooore

Highly erotic. I'd bow down and kiss your toes right here, but all I would be tasting is my keyboard and it would ruin the fantasy ;)

Thank you, Vix.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleabout 19 years ago
I surrender

wow a witty word wizard poem~

bows humble (~_~) excellent erotic poetry

dcpoet44dcpoet44about 19 years ago
my glasses are steamed.......

and i wonder why......*LOL*......absolutely a terrific write.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Wow!

I've been looking for this level of heat all morning. Steamy, seductive and well written. Thanks!

~Syn

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