Poet vs. Technician

1. I find your question obscenely offensive but i am here to post my poems : not to hear ur unsolicited advice

2. Is this Literotica.com your Father's property : who are you to issue a Fuckin' show-cause "what are you doing here ?"

3. I adore a good Fight : so if it's Warfare U r lookin' for Bring it On !!!!!!

each to their own and theirs. TK U MLJ LV NV

a little thought - it ends - a comment or two with specifics, it ends, and I go back to handing out the fives, and perhaps advice, and you don't have to take it, but I do take the baits and I'm not the kind of fish you want in the boat.

really now, I receive these emails with a certain regularity, and then I checked the comments( I saw none, a certain pattern I have seen before). For the most part they could be generated in less than 10 minutes. But really now the heart of the issue, IF you are not yet another poison pawn, is the amount of nonsense you post. Fact is two poems in one day, specifically directed at me and the amount of time spent defending what, you are a poet. Show it more often, most of your submissions are substandard, some however are not. Almost no comment from you has any substance. And you keep pointing fingers?

You the poet, immune from criticism? This is what 5th or 6th in a series? You are not that stupid to realize that excess punctuation and lack of edit could perhaps be legitimate advice, that was the gist of earlier comments, your failure to take that and future email tells me sometime else is going on. A game perhaps, in other words you are NOT really interested in poetry. So why are you here?

I've nuthin' to do with the Honky-anon ---this ain't a plant , set-up or as they say in Urdu a Saazish but U do have strong John Foster Dullesian Domino & Conspiracy Theories & Yes now U remind me I did ask U whether U r a Russian or an Egyptian in the long-ago era when U wrote or used to write poems with an international flavour which used to capture my imagination !! Where has that Poetic flair disappeared , old friend : all i perceive is a Grumpy ole' Grouch who continually wallows & whines in Self-pity nowadays!?!?

but I wanted to say I like both poems you submitted today. You have great ideas and I think you are showing more and more that you can write substantive poems. Just an opinion here and I hope to read more. Thanks for sharing them.

do you know I am white?

how do I know you are brown? really? let's just say certain things don't line up right?

ur first question to me was R U Egyptian or R U Russian? Remember? so let's not pull up the R-card. Now we have an ANON who is Honkying my ass. I strongly suggest you read this poem to yourself and you make a decision as to the proper relationship between poetry and technique. And then get back with some real critique.

Because this looks like a plant. a set-up from a certain quarter otherwise. In other words another god damn alt.

and you might also consider some of the other earlier crits i left.

Thought you were female. Doesn't matter. Namaste.

No wonder you understand that my 'god' poem had a vedanta/buddhist bent. So great to see another woman here who seems to resemble me in ways that matter. And I would agree, the sight of wet saris clinging to curves as a beautiful, dark-skinned woman emerges, dripping, from a river, would make me stop to savor the moment (assuming good air quality ;). Perhaps it should be 'fight', not 'fright', for the Creator artist is fighting with the Maintainer structurer, Fight Club style, if I may speak in poetic metaphor. I have a tool for the engineer inside as well - I write the entire alphabet across the top of my workpage so I can sound out word possibilities as I develop my poem. 5 stars especially because I relate.

Simon Cowell of Literotica : hard to get angry @ U !