- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Quiet Wind
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Click here We, shake in silence
as weakened hearts pray
for the gift of prolonged life.
We, sit isolated in fear
of the worst predictions.
We, become paralized
partners on the sidelines
hoping for the promise
of another tomorrow.
So we hold on to our faith
and let go of our fear
and silence becomes
our serenity...
- COMMENTS
Maria2394about 19 years agosilence and serenity. like a room filled with the bursting hum of a thousand smiles. nice work blue, enjoyed :)
Bridget69about 19 years agoupon life, and finding peace and acceptance within what it offers us.
dcpoet44about 19 years agoprevails through these words. you left a very nice quiet wind. nice work!!...don
Wanton Vixxxenabout 19 years agoand soothing effect this winds down with in the last stanza, blue. Makes you wonder if the way to handle life's uncontrollable surprises is with meditation. This poem just convinced Me of that. Very nice job!
Vixxx
Anonymousabout 19 years agoAs dear MET says - this speaks of meditation. I did wonder about the comma here "We, become paralized". All in all, lovely, thank you.
Tess
My Erotic Tailabout 19 years agoI meditate daily, mostly once a morning shortly and as I lay to rest at night, once during the day when the world shines in a beautiful moment, I take a moment and grasp my day, this moment is set aside for moment I live for the next move I make may be my last, a peak in the day where I grasp heaven and shake it, absorb the world and soak it like a sponge, to live at least once in a days moment.
a moment to live, your poem made my moment ~today <grin>
Anonymousabout 19 years agoA thinking and feeling poem. One that asks you to stop your mind and let your soul comprehend. I myself would have broken up the first stanza into two... to slow down the rhythm. The last stanza has a quiet power to it..
So we hold on to our faith
and let go of our fear
and silence becomes
our serenity...
Good work Mentioned in the Sunday reviews..
du~
