- Erotic Poetry
- Red Sex
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Click hereThere's no need to blush
when we turn the mattress.
How much blood has your body spent
in all our years together?
How many nights have you pressed your
aching belly against my back?
Truly live with a woman and
you will know blood:
the leak that bespeaks the fertility that twice
turned me inside out and right way up.
So don't blush at a love which is
more than mattress-deep.
- COMMENTS
greenmountaineerover 13 years agoI can't add much that hasn't already been said, except
"the leak that bespeaks the fertility that twice
turned me inside out and right way up."
may be the best 2 lines I've read in quite a while.
twelveooneover 13 years agoall of the below,
and inspiring - to go read Comac McCarty
Truly live with a woman and
you will know blood:
and go write something myself
frighting
easy 100
now leave some comments, which is why I didn't leave anything on sennelson's, 'cause he never does.
buttersover 13 years agoin this write. a beautiful song so well composed - it's truly moving.
like how you use the colour on the mattress and the colour in her cheeks, both caused by blood.
GuiltyPleasureover 13 years ago......deftly handled. A natural occurrence seldom spoken of in polite society and even rarer as an erotic poetic muse. Nicely done.
Tess
Esperanza_Hidalgoover 13 years agothink of some sophisticated literary terminology to use to describe this peace. Hmmm, how 'bout it kick's ass? Always liked your stuff since last year, but seems like you have hit a stride. Comparison at the end was so kewl, and one is a little hurting and breathless as one reads, especially if you have struggled with learning how to love and be intimate (I do not refer to you... :~)
UnderYourSpellover 13 years agoI don't think I've seen a poem on this subject before and this one is beautifully and sensitively written although I must say I'm not overly keen on the title
vrosej10over 13 years agoThis is real emotion conveyed in a beautiful way. It's getting a recommend.
