Smoke Ring

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The fantasy between us
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The feel of your breath on my neck

The smell of you, hot from passion

The taste of you as you slide over my tongue

The lust in your eyes just before you take me

Things I'll never know

Because you are hers

And I am his

The fantasy passes between us in a smile

Like a smoke ring

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
capturing

a moment's thought so well.

icantkeepitupicantkeepitupalmost 6 years ago
Touched by your poem

A courageous post, thank you. (I am waiting for my first poem to appear.)

A lot of readers will identify with your conundrum. Please tell us is this autobiographical or pure fantasy?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
nice image

but is it adept?