- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Stella and Irene
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Stella and Irene love, hold hands,
laughing at the silliness of life,
their sunshine lights a room
and teaches me to cook
some special magic.
I know Irene cries
in Stella's arms some nights,
hurt by a world with it's taunts,
their love no less beautiful
than those who claim
a higher understanding,
but never see as I do
two women heart to heart.
- COMMENTS
GuiltyPleasureabout 13 years ago......don't need my comment - just know I read it, enjoyed it and voted.
Tess
Esperanza_Hidalgoabout 13 years agothank you again and again and again and again. I cry over this. I relate. It burns. You get it.
vrosej10about 13 years agoI get so angry when I hear about good people suffering like this. And this is a sign you have written something excellent. Getting a recommend.
buttersabout 13 years agothe sweetness balanced by the sadness it also calls to mind, but these lines cannot help but make a person smile with their warmth:
their sunshine lights a room
and teaches me to cook
some special magic.
fridayamabout 13 years agoand true.
(Shall we both enrol in Theo's Poetry 101? I think we need it x)
Esperanza_Hidalgoabout 13 years agofor stating truth. Love is love.
I say no more, but feel like ripping bigot's throats from their bodies.
Maria2394about 13 years agobeautiful, Annie. In more than one way. It has a couple of spots, like the it's, and maybe lose a comma,( because lots of times a line break is a pause in itself) but it is one of your best. A lovely read this morning.
~ maria
theognisabout 13 years agoNot this:
"hurt by a world with it's taunts,"
But this:
hurt by a world with its taunts,
Wrote a 'poem' about it. :)
Okay, I'll stop. Five.
