- Illustrated Poetry
- Sunset
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I wait for nightfall to greet me
as the sun vanishes.
Amber heaven fades
kindly before my eyes.
Cold winds drift through
my open window.
Silence rises as darkness
is about to set in.
Clouds drown in peaceful skies
leaving a soft glow behind.
- COMMENTS
duddle146over 17 years agoA beautiful poem describing a sunset and how the nocturnal evening hours unfold. Mystical in its brilliance. Lovely photograph goes well with this poem.
Anonymousabout 19 years agoIf i ever win the lotto or powerball i will so totally email you and find a place to meet you to hook you up with a large amount of cash. I really wish you were getting paid for this great stuff. I mean it, i hope your life is going great because you seem like a really nice person. If you are ever planning on being near denver or boulder you should post it on your bio spot if you need a place to stay or something and then i will email you.
i meant to leave this at your defending sis place but i already left one and it wouldnt let me leave 2, oh well.
that is kinda sucky that you dont accept annonomous feedback because i dont have a name here.
evan
Bridget69about 19 years agoBeautifully captures the transition from day to night. Very nice.
lindianaabout 19 years agoCaptured the moment and your emotions nicely.
Thank you for sharing.
DeepAsleepabout 19 years agois mentioned in the new poetry reviews found on the poetry discussion message board, in the literotica forums.
~DeepAsleep
