teardrops

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Yes, I admit I was staring at your ass,
what do you make of it?
So perfect with cheeks shaped like teardrops,
it almost made me cry.
I realize, I should have said that I was lost
in the beauty of your eyes;
but as you were wearing sunglasses, I thought
you would see though that line.

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Bill DadaBill Dadaover 16 years ago
^

A post-modern come-on. Does it work?

KOLKOREKOLKOREover 16 years ago
I could cry ...

No wonder you hear of yester days when people could sell in the right time and place a good metaphore for a good sum of money...

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 19 years ago
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oh, how precious--an ass poem. :)

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Talealmost 19 years ago
I have been there

I simply informed her she had a wasp on her...ummm other side ...<BIGrin> great poem ...an eleven not quite a ...

Bridget69Bridget69almost 19 years ago
Very interesting...

observation. I never really thought of teardrops while looking at someone's butt. LOL! But now that you mention it, it's quite true.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
good.......

why hide it.......i'm a big time ass watcher. dig this......don

Wanton VixxxenWanton Vixxxenalmost 19 years ago
Caught!!!...

in the act of that ever pleasurable for both genders - "ass watching", you have given the readers {and butt admirers} another shape to perceive... "so perfect with cheeks shaped like teardrops". I simply loved this. <grinin'>

Vixxx

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
the mouse

is a lion

growl!

as

Jennifer CJennifer Cabout 19 years ago
LOL

Made me chuckle,

thanks.

~ J

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