- Non-Erotic Poetry
- That Smile
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Click hereThat Smile
The look that makes men mad
and losing all resolve
submit to her desires,
for just another glimpse
of that soul-dissolving smile.
It lights him up so well,
he floats for days on end
and when all else is lost,
recalls that potent smile.
She speaks so soft and sweet
and asks for nothing much;
all you recall are lips a'twitch,
that shake you to your core.
You work so hard to please,
you know not what you do;
you only know her face's promise
for you, your sole reward.
I close my eyes, I look away,
my freedom's just too dear;
but should I find that special one,
I'll look without a moment's fear,
surrendering my soul to her
for all eternity.
© Leon Brozyna 2005
Inspired by Wanton Vixxxen's "Cyanide Smile"
- COMMENTS
BikeNutabout 17 years agoYou've seen thru us! Blind 'em with a smile and they trip over themselves just for more of that smile....and maybe more!!
OSoBuffabout 17 years agoThat's how they do it -- I know -- it happened to me and the next thing I know, she's moving in, cats and all!!! Not complaining.
EmJ0385about 18 years agoWhat we need now is to find you a finger to get wrapped around--someone with a great smile. Nice contrast to Wanton Vixxxen's "Cyanide Smile". Whether a vampiric seductress or a softly warming romantic, our smiles are devastating.
SweetDealabout 18 years agoI can see how "Cyanide Smile" would inspire this, and I can see it has got a much softer feel, but still do not doubt the power of a woman's smile!
PatHous56about 18 years agoI see "Cyanide Smile" inspired this piece. That's quite a contrast, creating a soft, pink, romantic verse from a hard, red, vampiric-toned verse. I see you've experienced the power of a woman's smile first-hand. But this is a case where forewarned does not make you adequately forearmed. Patricia
CaPic267about 18 years agoLeon, Now that I know how easily you can be manipulated, you had best stay hidden up there in the frigid north -- and don't tell anyone else you wrote this or some woman will end up wearing not a ring, but you, on her finger. CP
Wanton Vixxxenabout 18 years agoas I read your romantic version of a man's strength and resolve liquefied - all by the powerful mystique of a woman's smile. I am flattered that My darkly ominous poem inspired you to pen this much softer voice of infatuation and confession of a male's weakness. But then again, Leon, it proves the power of ANY woman's smile - whether it's sweet or cyanide - can make a blind man see.
Her way, that is.
Very smiley Vixxx
RhymeFairyover 18 years agoI love it LeBroz. Men can be so romantic when they put their minds to it, and here I think you have hit a bulls eye !!
Thinkin not much more a gurl likes, then to hear how her smile effects you ... in a poem. Vavoom Baby !! Hoping you find your one my friend ... sweet poem and sexy as heck ~!!
sweet GA peachesover 18 years agomore beautiful, than a soul
leaving all disguise,
and finding itself with a smile.
It is the warmest gesture
of the heart..you captured
my *smile* with this one.
-sGp-
Leviluvover 18 years agoI'm glad to hear that I was at least a "little" helpful, and you didn't take it hard. The forum is scaring me being new. ::blushes::
