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Click hereYou call me the Brain Tumour
'cause I'm always on your mind.
the comments are cracking me up. OKAY, since everybody is giving you a three, I'm giving you a twenty just to balance everything out! I do like this little thing friday, I don't care if it isn't poetry--it should be in a television show ;-).
Can't go past it; I love good bastardry. I am known to be sarky myself. 1 as a poem, 4 as commentary. Remind me not to piss you off.
We're friends right and friends can tell it straight? I don't see this as a poem more a one liner and a very clever one at that. Maybe I'm wrong because there is a thread on the forum of three words or less but I've got great lines strashed away that I hope to put into something more substantial one day x
If t hat is what constitutes a brain tumor, then I have several :)
~ maria
erm, is it a poem? nah, it's an epigram (imo anyway)
i'm struggling with this pithy little 'thing'. and it IS pithy. can't give it more than a 3, sorry, and it only gets that for its 'pithiness'
*bites lip*
tell you what, though, friday, the text juxtaposed with that weighty bold title really makes the title smack the reader in the face, like a big old bad undeniable life-threatening tumour, the epigram like a sneery little voice in the back of one's mind.
I read this as a tribute of sorts to...
I was tempted to pull the 3 trigger, ah 5.